Nice! LOVE the earth golem! :) My only suggestion would be to not show the first one (the cliff city bridge) for quite so long. I found myself becoming impatient and wanting to see what would come next. I think it's on screen for longer than any of the others, and you don't want people to lose interest before they've seen the rest of the reel. Anyway, minor nitpick. Otherwise great job! :)
I like. I would put more of the details of the city bridge as separate scenes - big ones (zoooooom) - not like this - bridge and then 2 pics on the side..you can see it is very detailed but you can't see the details. Or maybe a camera move around the city from top to bottom and around a bit - then the timing would be fine..you've put time in time - show it! :)
Yeah, maybe it just seems longer because you can't really see all the little details, and therefore it doesn't grab and hold your attention in the same way that some of the other models do (another factor, I think, is that the bridge model is very symmetrical, so with each 180 degree turn, it seems like you're back at the beginning). So yeah, what Kate said! ;)
Cliff City- I agree with Susanne and Kate. You seem to have nice props and some cloth simulation. Go into that ^^
Brade - improve the lighting. Add a bounce light maybe. The dark areas eat to much detail.
Ship - Great model but give it more detail to it. Add a figure to the nose of the ship or some cannons... If you want to go nuts make a ship wreck instead with it ^^
Japanese garden - Put some specularity in the stone rocks and RIM LIGHTS. Give a more interesting ambiance.
Love the earth golem. Has everything in place. All your models are great. Well done ^^
Nice! LOVE the earth golem! :)
ReplyDeleteMy only suggestion would be to not show the first one (the cliff city bridge) for quite so long. I found myself becoming impatient and wanting to see what would come next. I think it's on screen for longer than any of the others, and you don't want people to lose interest before they've seen the rest of the reel.
Anyway, minor nitpick. Otherwise great job! :)
actually it has the same timing as the others :S I don't know why happen that makes that impression
ReplyDeleteI like. I would put more of the details of the city bridge as separate scenes - big ones (zoooooom) - not like this - bridge and then 2 pics on the side..you can see it is very detailed but you can't see the details. Or maybe a camera move around the city from top to bottom and around a bit - then the timing would be fine..you've put time in time - show it! :)
ReplyDeleteYeah, maybe it just seems longer because you can't really see all the little details, and therefore it doesn't grab and hold your attention in the same way that some of the other models do (another factor, I think, is that the bridge model is very symmetrical, so with each 180 degree turn, it seems like you're back at the beginning). So yeah, what Kate said! ;)
ReplyDeletehey hey. Sorry for not replying the other day.
ReplyDeleteCliff City- I agree with Susanne and Kate. You seem to have nice props and some cloth simulation. Go into that ^^
Brade - improve the lighting. Add a bounce light maybe. The dark areas eat to much detail.
Ship - Great model but give it more detail to it. Add a figure to the nose of the ship or some cannons... If you want to go nuts make a ship wreck instead with it ^^
Japanese garden - Put some specularity in the stone rocks and RIM LIGHTS. Give a more interesting ambiance.
Love the earth golem. Has everything in place. All your models are great. Well done ^^